for some weird reason i liked it. it reminded me of mario and it felt energetic in just 14 seconds. its cool, you should keep working on this one and add some guitar or drums to it
I'm afraid that if I'll try to improve it,i will only make it worse. it happens with pretty much everything that i try to compose :X
but thanks for the review :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.