the other person has a point
I understand what the other person meant. instead of following the exact instrumental, you should have made it also your own at the same time, you know, make it more complete sounding. Its possible to do with the instrumental version, but you would have to make edits. Hey its your choice on what to do so I say 7/10 in the end
It was good but not great.
The beats were well planned out it seemed but there was no sound that really shouted unique. In your song it felt like each sound was playing backup waiting for the lead singer to step up but it didnt happen. i see potential hope you try harder on your next work.