Backend of Forever
Everything needs more Violin. The transition from the intro at around 16 seconds could have been more built up. It sounds like a sickly sweet finish. You may have won but what did you have to do to have it happen?
To improve this, you should add some violins to it. They could make a great bass and contrast to the piano.
The song itself, excellent. The intro was the weakest part of it, and I still love it. It transitioned perfectly, and it ended perfectly. Great work.
Thanks for the review. That's a great idea.. I really need to find some string players... haha!
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