The piano sample could almost be good if you chopped it and ... well .. did something else with it lol. The beat is simple but not the most horrible thing ive ever heard in my life. it could almost be a quirky beat if it didnt just seem thrown together. The no bassline is... you don't have one. And the no variation at all also hurts the track. uhhhhhhh.... keep trying :)
Thx 4 ur criticsm, DJ, and I respect ur view. It's not very varied, and it probly does need a bassline. I'll try to keep this in view in future tracks.