but a little quiet.
but a little quiet.
Man your GOOD
Impressive man, this song is really peaceful the melodies are well made It is really smooth I love it. Keep making things like this, nothing bad I can say about this :)
Thanks again for the review Pygme! Glad you like it so much.
I'm enjoying the fact that you catched on the mood that i tried to pass along with this song :) Lovely to see that it worked, in a way ;)
very nice, very nice indeed!
I liked the piano melody a lot, very calm and beautifull.
A suggestion on what you could change is to rethink a lil how your drum loop get's introduced into the song. Instead of going in with the whole loop velocity automated, feels a little needlessly sudden, you could've started out with just the bass drum to give a lil epic feeling then slowly added the hihats and whatnot. Hope you understand what I'm getting at since while I'm writing this I confuse myself a lil xD
Very nicely done :)
Thanks again for your review Shoephly!
I have to admit (with shame) that i did just learn about how to make the Automation Clips work, so i was kind of eager to optimize the use of it in a song. But now that you mention this i do agree with you, it might sound a little bit better if i start out with one or two pieces of the drums and let the rest come in slightly later. As i've said before i'll keep working on this song and i'll definitely let you know if i reupload a enhanced version!
Thanks again for the review and the kind words, it's truely great to hear that people actually like your work!
This song is really great. Gave a 5/5! I really like the piano/ drums combo! The melody really flows and it makes me almost want to cry!
For some reason I thought of someone looking back and seeing the things that had occurred but could never fix the past, so they tried they're hardest to repair all that had been done, only to find that the damage was far too great.
I hope that didn't sound too deep or weird but this song has some big emotions to convey.
It could use a nice bass-line and some refinement, that's the reason for the 9, but overall this song is amazing!
Definitely continue making these awesome pieces!!!
I really enjoy your music!
Thanks for your review John!
You really seem to have thought about it, and i must say that it's alot deeper then what i could come up with.. I really wanted to give a deep feeling to it but i was never really able to think of something that fit, and i must say your description seems to blend in perfectly with the song, so for that, i also want to thank you!
About the bass-line, i wasn't really sure wheater to make one or not as i originally intended to make it JUST the Piano and drums, so i decided to leave it like this and hear the input and criticism from others first. I might have a look at it later and try working out a bass line for it, i'll definitely let you know once i'm finished with that!
Finally, thanks again for the great ratings and kind words, it truely means alot to me! And i have to tell you again, i really like your view on the music!
this was amazing. it almost made me cry at the intro. also, the drums fit very well. good job on that. it kept my interest. i wanted to hear some singing though. fwuh >.<
about half when it changed the piano part, it was awkward for a second, but then brought back. i enjoyed it overall
anyways, good job, and please return a review on my new song http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/348129
Thanks alot for your review Vibe!
I'm glad to hear that the emotions i tried to blend in here caught you so much, I know the change to the different piano part might not be perfect but i really felt that i should not do a 3 minute song with the same melody, thought it might get a little too repetatvie after a while so i did want to add some variation in it, and that might still need some improvement :)
About the singing, i have to admit that i haven't worked with voice samples yet, but if i get better at FL Studio i'll definitely try and work something out for that, i'll let you know one day :).
Once again thanks for the review and the rating, it means alot to me to hear that you like it!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.