This definintely has potential, it sounds like you worked really hard on it, but some finishing touches would be nice. First, I reccomend an ambient undertone throughout the whole track to break up the pounding. Next, I recomend toning down the main synth and diversifing it, instead of repeating it exactly over and over again, change pitch more often and go to different ends of the sound spectrum. Finaly, add little sound effects here and there to break up the pounding and monotony (by pounding I mean higher tones, not the base, the base is fine).Also, the end got a little chaotic, and wasn't harmonious. These are things I notice the NG legends do, and hopefully after impelmenting them, you will become a NG legend. Adios amigo!
i might use in a submission
This song has a bit of potential, you seem to be one of those artists that know what they're doing and can make a great song but can't enhance it much yet. Your stuff is very catchy, but very generic. Try using the Fast Distortion, Filter, and Parametric EQ effects as well as Delay 2, those are what really make people's leads and melodies sound great. If you have AIM, IM me, I want to remix this :P
-TheComet (check my stuff!)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.