pretty rad bruh

hey, nice job.

realistically, it deserves, a 5 or 6, because, its not that catchy or anything, but understand youre just starting out, so here are a few pointers:
-start out slow, not so hard hitting right away in the first 5 seconds. if you need to, give it like 20 seconds to flow together.
-you're envelope effects on certain notes werent executed to their full potential. if you're gunna use them, make sure to take a bit more time.
- you gotta use certain effects to not make it sound so 8 bit in the beginning. experiment around and see what you find. im sure you'll be pleasantly surprised ^-^
- i see what youre going for, and take my advice, dont go for it. you're trying to come up with something thats originally that doesn't sound like you got it from anywhere else, and while individuality is good, not for a first song man. use a common beat, and just build off of that, you'll be amazed at what you can come up with.
-make sure the tracks flow better together. i noticed that some of you're tracks didn't complement each other that well, and you might want to look into that, and make it more pleasing to the ear.

ok, those are just a few pointers i can offer for you're music. hahaha, ill let you know, when i started to use programs like sonar, i had no idea how to control shit, and from what you're doing, you knew more about how effects were sooner than i did when i started out.
but what i did like, was the overall complementary tones that gave it that fullness of an actual song. dont lose that aspect. as soon as you do, everything falls down.

one more thing before i cut off. where does it end?
i know endings are hard, bro, trust me, but you gotta spend a little more time on them because of that. be honest, that ending wasn't the best you got right? ahh, yeah, well, the more you mess around with, the more likely youll find something you really like, and that can totally be used as a trail off.

AND AGAIN,
great job with what you've come up with. that was a great first try at techno. i cant wait to see what else you have coming up bro. ill follow youre stuff and keep you posted. good luck composing man! i have faith you'll do great!

NiCe!

I see that you are just starting to create more music, but you already progressing! Well done!
You try and this is a big +!
I am sure that in the future you will be very famous not only on Newgrounds, but everywhere else, because now the music is appreciated!
Good luck!
-DJYourSmile

Once again, pretty good.

I like the synths you use, the melodies are pretty good. It just comes down to getting better with whatever program your using. And with time, you'll be pretty damn good.

-DJ T3chnic

4/5

I liked this one as well. It doesn't have the heavy nature of some techno, but I like it. The melodies get a tad dissonant at times, but for some people that could be the sound they're looking for. I know I could use it for a movie scene easily. I was felt robbed by the ending.

Nicely Done.