This has potential, but you really have to readjust that autotune, most of it is fine, but lower in the range, the autotune is horribly off-key, which ruined the whole song for me hearing 1 note every so often that was just like nails on a chalkboard.
Aside from that, it wasn't too bad. My only big complaint (Badly tuned autotune aside) is that it's much too simple in terms of progression, there is no real lift to the song. It sounds nice in the intro, but it never really progresses any further than the feel in the intro. Simply put, there's no real climax, the chorus really could have used a little more fleshing out, maybe adding a nice soft pad or an atmospheric texture to just pump up the emotional pull that is usually found in the chorus of songs.
My final tiny gripe is that the synth used in the chorus sounds like it was detuned just a tiny bit too much.
And critique aside, I'd suggest trying to do a track (Be it this one or another song) without autotune, you have a very soft voice, which is perfect for this type of "vocal trance". Don't rely on autotune too much, you'll never learn to sing better if you don't try without it.
Thanks for the review. I agree with pretty much everything there. I'll have to rework this song. As for my singing, I am practicing without Autotune, but at the moment it doesn't soundd very good so I haven't posted any songs without Autotune. I plan to when I'm able to hit the right pitches though. :)