I like both of the synths and the melody, but the drums need to be a little more prominent in my opinion. Im also not thrilled with your choice of snare drum, cuz its a little too heavy on the high end. It could use a bit of EQing (my least favorite part just so you know) but its a great start and its pretty epic. I especially like the midsection drop, its pretty :)
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