Kind of interesting for a run, though yet it can also be a ton better.
Note that the balance between the parts is simply not there. I could not hear the rhythm guitars well nor could I hear the bass or the drums that well either.
What I did hear was the riffs simply not remaining catchy and simply did not quite get the pull (this part is only my opinion) that people should be expecting, and it might have looked good on paper, but then simply did not translate too well, which is what happened I think.
The riffs probably were, simply, quiet, if I had to guess?
I liked the flute intro however. That sounded nice, but it can ruin a song if a good pull cannot be achieved.
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