First of all, I have been a fan of this song for awhile, ever since you first came out with it.
With that being said, I have a few suggestions that I would like to suggest.

I like the begining, it has a nice feel to the build up, but at the 48 second mark, it feels
like what would have been a powerful crest, worthy of a two foot jump stomp and head bang,
sort of just, disapears. It just feels like there should be some sort of explosive force,
that makes the skin tingle, compared to the quiet intro. Drop the hammer, let loose the
building tension, and it will build a beautiful wave of sound to carry the listener.
The "heavy" lead into beats are too muffled personally.

The other thing being, the transition between 2:36 and 2:40 is too short.
It feels too abrupt, one can almost feel the volume slider being slid suddenly down, and
the song mellows out. It's a good ending, but if possible, some sort of melding of the beats.
I like how the song ends though.

Anyways, keep up the good work, and hope to hear more. :D

mix this with samurai-rockoff and it makes AWE!

the one mixed with samurai-rockoff is just AWESOME!!!! but still. the two are one of the best music i've ever heard!

ummmmm

It was 2 chilled like for a legend of zelda game (future one or something), didn't stand out enough, also the synth was way too familiar.

the bass

very reminiscent of the tech-pop thing going on with stuff like 3oh3 or kesha.
if i had to give a tip, i'd say work on your drum comp more, because more often than not, drum loops tend to have a loud half and a subtle half.
the hits on the off-beat and snares are on the explicit, then a quieter 16th-note rhythm gives depth to a drum track. and if you master it correctly, it really adds to a song.

This sounds nice

i think the beats are jammin' and the hooks are sweet bro

did i get my music terminology right