This looks like a mixture between hip-hop, trance and electro!
That's really nice!
For me the pace is quite good and catchy.
I do not really see the great fault, everything is really great. It's great! Maybe the sudden change of pace sometimes, it's a bit weird but not too embarrassing.
I will not dwell too much or I'll confuse me in my comments!
Good luck for the future.
Yeah, I really like that whole feel to those type of songs :) bands like 3oh3 and lmfao and such...thanks for the comment and critique, though, man, is there a way to add people like a deviantwatch on deviantart on this? haha I always like to listen to other people's stuff too
my favorite so far dude!
Haha what would you say that I do in the future that I did in this song...? like just curious haha