It has potential.
Originality - 9 - The piece is certainly original. Love the whole theme.
Diversity - 3 - Almost none. Definately more harmony, not just with violins. When the bass broke in I was really dissappointed because it just followed the same tune, but I knew it had more potential...I could sort of sense a chord that would have really made it better. Yeah that was weird but I'm like that :o
Clarity - 9 - Very well done. Sounds crisp and clear, and I like how you've actually mixed in real instruments (you are an excellent violin player!).
Effort - 7 - Good amount of effort put into the instruments, not much put into the diversity of the song.
Overall - 6 - This song had real potential, but failed to fully unlock it. Keep working at it, and you'll have a real nice tune on your hands :)
oh mah gawd! i soooooo love this! great song!
LOL. thank man, do you have an AIM or an email i can reach you at? i keep seeing your name popping up in my reviews =D. imam review you back ome day. yes.
the violin sounds awesome.. especially during that break wen the violin comes in and compliments the other violin with those harmonics...
Very nice. You put it all together in an almost addicting way. Good work ^^
thought id stop by...y'now ,leave a good review.
make you feel all good n fuzzy inside.
The arp was, good.
not great, it seemed like it was a normal quadruplet arp. The violin playing was magnificent and the quality was great.
if only i could use drums in a trance piece like this, eh?
The drums are begginning to get pretty monotonous.
ill jsut lay it down pat.
the break ins are pretty iffy, in fact, i dont sense any break ins.
it just...gets right to the beat.
add sum break ins or fills jst to make it more smooth, or at least make more beats.
not just 2 patterns.
and the open hi hat on the snare is kinda bugging me.
wow, right about now it hit all emoish metal on me.
it got all freaky with the FX and the dist SLAYER guitar.
damn, i had to stop the song, cause i had to help my dad do somethig, so i never got to hear the end.
well, ill just ASSUME that that was near the end, so heres my summary.
Notes: Too repetitive, maybe if you slowed it down and made it into a industrial/ambient trk it would fit.Also, fool around with different patterns with your arpeggios, make it sound a little more customized.
Arrangment: neds more patterns, fills, break ins, FX, whatnot.
Drums(im big on the drums, if they dont sound good, i wont like em) and like i said, the beat was a little too monotonous.
So, just a little variety.
Mastering: Needs more work there.
When the song reaches the climax, on the monitor, it should say that that it only comes up to a little bit over half at the climax of the song (the lodest part).
so, good luck with future projects, and i hope i didnt offend ya.