Vous sont terribles à la musique. Vous Sucer. Pourquoi continuez-vous? Veuillez arrêter. Cette méthode échoue. Vous échouer. Vous êtes savoureux. Sucker.
Not sure what to say about this one..
I see what you were trying to do...
you just didn't quite pull it off. New variations and instruments needed to be introduced earlier, and in the beginning, some sort of tune/melody would have been nice. Also, that scratched noise gets on your nerves really quickly.