i feel the pasion, but I don't hear it.
If you find some sample packs, or beat kits from FL Studio, you could make this song 10x better.
just a thought.... but yea man, i really dig this song.
9 because your on your way to making a really good song.
It has a bit to much of the same so it gets boring after a while but not bad :P
Sorry for my english im from the Netherlands