its good but needs something.....

its be great if u could ADD after the first 30-40 sec DNB and then build it up

Nice melodic action

But again, as i've noted in a different review, it's a bit smashed by bad mixing (the spikes here are at ~3.2khz and ~7.3) and too hard panning... I know it sounds neat for a minute, and maybe this was just an experiment, but it makes for a jarring experience that is otherwise nice and peaceful. Get a wave editor, pronto :)