I liked the bass track, but the drum loops were ear piercing. Too much treble. The voices were unneeded, and if they were, you might have wanted to add a vocoder to make it more appealing to the ear. Overall, it's promising, but not quite good.
thanks for the critique to be honest im just playin around with the program cause there are many thing i had no clue existed on fl9. i am a novice learning as i experiment.