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Jul 6, 2010 | 10:24 PM EDT
File Info
1.4 MB
1 min 16 sec
3.44 / 5.00

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 3.44 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
526 Plays | 30 Downloads
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Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern

Author Comments

Just a simple little thing I cooked up while trying to make a beat. Whaddya think?



Rated 1.5 / 5 stars


0:02 This is good. Piano comes in.
0:10 I don't really like the bass. Just seemed like it's tacked on top sorta. If u know what i mean.
0:42 That was a little unexpected. Meanwhile I'm a little bored with the tune.

I'm sorry to sound negative, but I don't get the point of this track. It's a little annoying, actually. And what does it have to do with Island Rap? It doesn't loop properly either. But I guess I should give you a few pointers.

If you make the bass cohere more with the melody, then you've got a better sounding track. If you make it less repetitive, it would sound better. If you add bongoes, it probably won't sound any better, but it's worth a try. Just to add some sort of variety in the song, instead of the same tune over and over again. I want to listen to something that I can listen to on repeat and not have to jump out of the nearest window. Maddening, it is. But nice try. Just a few pointers.

Overall, you can do better. I know it. There's a lot of potential. But even though you may like this, I really did not. But I'll keep an eye on you anyway. Good luck!

Thanks for letting me listen anyway!