not bad but...
here's a tip, if you want something good don't repeat something over and over, I mean at least change the volume, even film scores, who tend to repeat parts over and over, try to at least hide the back bone of the song, If I were you I would do what they would do, and gradually decrease in volume till it's just strings, then increase till your ears burn up... ok maybe not taht far, but you get the point... :D cudos. 7/10.
I agree. The strings in your right ear sort of are overwhelming. The pace doesn't really slow down, does it? I seem to have the case of mis-voluminising. Or something. But that's true, the right ear does get annoying. I might make another orchestral tune soon. Man, gamekrazzy, you got me inspired! I'm sure to review some more of your submissions when I get the time. Possibly tomorrow or the next day when I'm not busy. But thank you, I think I'll go to bed very soon.