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Eternity(Completed)

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Author Comments

I believe this is the best song I have made so far.

Please rate and review, I worked super hard on this one.

Reviews


What Harlock said

Sounds like the frequencies were getting blended, but that shouldn't be hard to sort out. Solid leads and beat.



Thoughts

How long have you been producing for?

It seems like I can tell where you're at right now, because this track is pretty reminiscent of myself in certain ways (at least some bits of me presently, mostly in the past).

Some tips -

Transitions could use a better tie,

Try and break up the track into a song structure, and do it with a strong transition tie (use less crashes and use them sparingly at the end of a Chorus for example).

Bassline, try EQing it so you don't have so many instruments blending in the same frequencies, that way your track sounds more defined.

Repetition is always good, but try working your instruments, for example the intro melody, into a longer progression.

Drums seem pretty good, the bass kick seems a bit weak, if it were deeper it'd be pretty slick.

Keep it up mate,
~DJ Harlock


theoneinsafety responds:

I've only been seriously producing for a little over a year now, I'm working on trying to better my music. your tips should help a lot.
thanks alot.

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Credits & Info


Listens
1,041
Downloads
184
Votes
80
Score
4.47 / 5.00

Uploaded
Jul 4, 2010
11:34 AM EDT
Genre
Techno
File Info
Song
3.5 MB
3 min 6 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.