I may label this unfinished, but I love how different is, so I need some feedback.
Let me know what you guys think, maybe I rushed it but, speak your mind.
ShaggyHaired on the beat.
Lyrics
I walk on clouds and left the ground behind
I'm bound to find a better view up here
I grab myself a souvenir and place it in my pocket a star
Drop back like a comet and fall in the water
More than exploring I'm touring this planet,
A traveller, I ditched the maps a while back,
Unravelled them A smile cracked there EMPTY,
E.nvision M.y P.ath T.hrough Y.ellow,
Dead trees No fencing,
Just open space I hope this place will grow,
It's beautiful But I'd rather float up in the sky,
And minimize my point of view, Smoke a joint or two,
Just drifting in some windy weather, I haven't been this better,
Since I read the letter from the Seven Brethren,
Damn there clever, Left the dirt, With the best of words,
And now they fly with feathered creatures,
The heavens greet us golden gates,
Throw some wings up on my shoulder blades,
But I told them wait, First I wanna fall free,
Through tall trees, I move my body through the branches,
If you really wanna live, the answers in the clouds.

HOOK
Now everybody come on with me,
Let us walk on clouds,
You know the grounds just the same old thing,
Every day.
You don't know what your missing,
Until you, Start to walk on clouds,
Just look around, and you'll see howw,
Great it isssssssssssss

Step by step I'm miles up and looking down,
My footings solid, but I'm not so sound.
I've got the vertigo, I've learned to let it go instead of centralizing stress.
I take a deep breath of thin air, I've been there, I feel blessed
To lay in the mist, The nimbus is my pillow flowing real slow,
Hovering above this planet, Brother I can manage,
I love the colors, watch the sun create a spectrum
And direct it's light around me the surrounding clouds illuminate
What a sight to see It's true that it's like nothing on the rock,
Quietly I close my eyes and walk, Higher than the mountain peaks,
I can shout and speak, nobodies near to hear it,
Working on the perfect lyrics and I think I found a beat,
It's the pounding of the sea against the sand,
Man, What I'd give to live in this place. It's like a video tape,
When your up in the clouds.

HOOK