The melody in this song is very uplifting and obviously trance like with out being cliche. Theres just a subtle flavor that gives it a personal touch. My only complaint that you really shouldnt even bother to change is how fast and strong the piano comes in after the intro, it should be a bit more gradual and organic. Overall very well done, this song deserves more exporsure and a better rating.
Thanks for the review dude, I'll try to work on this song sometime maybe and make it better.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.