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Jul 3, 2010 | 12:04 PM EDT
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2.4 MB
2 min 5 sec
4.35 / 5.00

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Rated 4.35 / 5 stars
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This is one of the first songs i've ever made using Fruity Loops.

I never really had the motivation to put more songs on here until a few days ago so i decided to look them up and post them here anyway.

I know it's all a little moderate and not all too good but i do not know too much about the genre and Fruity Loops itself.

I'm asking you to give me chance, rate fair and give me some comments about what i should do better!




Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Great Work!

I loved the song! But it would be so much better if you would put more power into. Something that would make you want to jump up and down and throw your fist into the air. Your doing a great job and keep it up! I gave a 9 becuase of the sound going softer and louder throughout the song to be a little annoying.

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Rated 5 / 5 stars


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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Good job!

You're definately a VERY talented beginner. There is no way I could do this when I was a beginner. The composition was great. The melodies were great. It all flowed very well, and it was clearly very well put together. You even had some fade ins and fade outs! I say techno music is your thing! Just a few little problems. The samples (the kick and the one weak synth) were too weak to fit that amazing lead synth (BTW what was the lead synth?) I suggest you either find other samples for those parts, or just spice up the ones you have. Maybe spice up the kick with a Blood Overdrive. Again, I don't want to sound too critical, because the composition and melodies are great! Just get a little more going with the song. Maybe add a hi-hat in between the kicks for a speedy sound, but that's personal preference. Also maybe more synths, to cover up emptiness. When you get to be great at FL (which I know you will, absolutely) I say you come back and remix this, because it's a good song. I see plenty of potential in your music, and I can't wait to see you improve! If you have any FL questions, just ask me or my buddy Chimy727 (he's awesome, he'll help you out). I'll try to help you get even better. Great song 5/5 9/10. Keep it up and God bless!
!IceMasterDlux ><>

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IVoltage responds:

Once again, thanks for the kind words IMD! It truely means alot to me to hear this from you ;)

I'm currently learning alot about FL Studio by Ste1438 and once i'm improved a little bit more, i'll promise you i'll do a redo on this!

The "Lead Synth" was one of the basic samples in FL Studio, I think it's called "Orion String" within "Packs - Dance - DNC_OrionString" (Once again, i was very limited in the amount of samples that i could use :( )

To be truely honest with you there actually WAS a hihat in the intire song, for some reason it became so soft that i was barely able to hear it and after alot of strugle i decided to F it and completely remove it ;)

About the "Maybe more synths" part, could you give me a tell where to get those? Or can i simply google it and that's it?

I truely appreciate the fact that you're offering to help me improve, and if i have some more time in the upcoming days i'll definitely send you a message!

Once again, thanks for all the supportive and kind words!



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

The lead synth doesn't fit with the rest

Find some much better samples for kicks, claps, etc.

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IVoltage responds:

Thanks for your hint and review mate, i'll definitely work on finding some more (and better) samples for my songs, because i've also noticed that i am very limited by the amount of samples that i posses right now..



Rated 3 / 5 stars

Good for being new on Fls Studio

If this is one of your first its pretty good mate, but being critical the song need more power to be uplifting there are some parts that sound a bit alone, anyway keep making stuff

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IVoltage responds:

Thanks for the review Pygme, I wasn't too enthusiastic about this song either but i decided to put it on here anyway.

There will be more from me very soon, that's a promise, and i'd like to thank you for the honesty in your review!