Why is this at number 4? it really has been a while since I found some good submissions on NG..
The song isn't bad but just doesn't sound right, try finding a better combination between the melody and the style you use.
Helps to read the description you think?
It's not a song, it's a test, playing around(demo) > looking for feedback, and not just someone bashing it without any real* reason.
For you're second part of the review: i'm looking for tips/feedback/suggestions for this melody to make this better combination.
owww too loud
open up this MP3 in audacity, and then in FL Studio, fix all the places where it clips.
wasn't the feedback i was asking for but sure, the clipping is because of my crappy as laptop. And "owww to loud" is a pretty useless... let's say; statement, there is a volume control on your computer you know? o.o
but thanks for the review nevertheless, just need to work on the quality. :)
Dude this sounds awesome! Love the way you've layered this song and composed this loop. Hope too head the finished this sounds awesome!
The drums, hi hats and everything like that are just stocksounds, put it all together to see how the melody would fit, I've never tried to have a fast paced violin melody in a song before, and when I experimented with this; I was so happy that it actually works very well together.
rest assured, I've already started a "real" song where this melody will be implemented, when it's done it'll be something special :)
Thanks a ton for the review! ^^