I'm not a musicianist so you can choose ot ignore me if you want:
First, I like the vocals, but sometimes the music overpowered the coice.
2nd, it's a bit repetitive at the beggining.
And 3rd, I think that the ending needs a more 'big' kind of thing.(Yes, thing.)
Overall, good job!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.