Ok, so you're very creative, but it has some flaws. Some drums hits are out of place, and the guitars sound crappy. I noticed you posted this in 2010. Have you been practicing since then? I'd like to hear what your creative mind has been able to come up with since then.
cheers, hope to hear you've kept it up.
Ahahah thanks man! I switched to art fulltime now, music composition is just a hobby these days. I have some stuff up on my soundcloud that is more recent https://soundcloud.com/anton-oxenuk