You have a nice song here but you have some problems. First off, you need to download some new drum samples badly because the ones you have do not fit at alllllllll. haha. also, your guitar VST in the begining is very poor quality. It sounds like you're using the stuff in the "Packs" tab of FLStudios. Broaden your horizons. because right now your instruments are limiting you. also, try throwing on a parametric equalizer or a limiter in there cuz you need to master it a bit better. Other than this stuff, your music that you have is by no means bad. just needs some fixing up. so Nice job and good luck! :D check out my stuff if you get the time ^_^
Very bright at the start, but finally the rest of the song kick in, well sort of.
A little inconsistent, for the most part, & the guitar is way to distorted.
Sytrus's Realistic Piano preset is getting a fair workout, and so is FPC(I prefer the piano roll). Remove a few instruments so it doesn't sound as cluttered, fix up the saturation & levels of the mix & it'll sound alot better.
thanks for the words. i try to look for better sounds for them but havent exactly found good ones yet...il be fixing them as soons as i get! ^^
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