Lets break this down
Your intro was good(not great but good)
I felt the kick went along with this song quite well
The synths used were very good
Your lead is good but you made it so it hits the wrong key strokes so it comes off sounding weird.
The way you had the Drums come in was terrible.
Have a Pad start at the beginning and then fade in the main lead then a epic build up into the song then try and make an epic outro mabye try and make a counter melody for this. Keep up the good work
I dont know how to EQ at all... like i just dont understand it at all.... im going to work on it thought i know it needs more build ups and i was going for the wierd sound ^_^. Any advice on EQ work? i use FL studio
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.