Okay. The Steve lines get really repetitive, especially since you're really rapping about yourself. Number one at the bottom three is a nice diss because of the messed up brackets. Redundant name was really the only personal thrown in the second verse. Solid bars though.
Funny lines. "what a joke man, just look at Icon..."<- interesting flow here.
I thought there were a few too many single syllable rhymes/vocabulary.
AND THE WINNER IS LADIES AND GENTLEMEN STEVE GUZZI!!!!!!! LOL GOOD JOB BUDD!
lol dude you said the same on both our tracks
nuff said im replying to this no matter if i got dq'd or not because this was dope and i aint gonna let this one go unanswered :) im coming back from a university today so it was no bitching out i just found out today naw meen LMAO!!!! but yea just letting you know ill have a reply the day i get back.....which is tomorrow
thanks man i'm bout to check yours out