Overall, well done.
The melody and chord progression was good, and I loved the piano part. The breakdown started WAY too quiet...I had to check the time bar to make sure the song wasn't over yet. But you got out of the breakdown into the main melody well, so that's good. The slowdown at the end was NOT good. Maybe keep the same tempo and end with a drum clash or something similar, but don't slow the tempo. And also, I think if you took the crowd noises out, it would be better.
well, quite nice
if you think it's great i can give a 10/10, but becuase at the end, it started to slow down, it makes a great song to become a normal techno song, like not even great, try remaster it, adding more beats, does not slow down, like ending with a drum clash,i believe you will be able to make more great song,( Do not take it at heart, It's just my opinion. )
Great thing that you made a full version :D
Eh, yeah, I'm glad you like it but I'm really not liking the ending so I'm most likely gonna remake the ending part.
But thanks and once again, I'm glad you like it! :)
Gratz on finishing it!
You didnt have to give me credit though xD
Anyways it fits your demo version perfectly.
I can just imagine teh crowds bouncing on top of each other xD
I agree teh ending was abrupt so id like to hear that remade into something just as beautiful as the rest of the song! :D
Haha, well.. giving you credit felt like the right thing to do. But uhh.. yeah, I'm gonna remake it hopefully.. so far I made the melody longer and more complex so it's not so... repetitive.
But anyways, thanks for the review! I'll make sure to send you a PM when I finish the new version. :)
The full version :D
I heard the 58 second version and I was amazed by the melody and overall piece.
However, I think it is important that you think out the whole piece before throwing on a random ending and leaving it out in the audio portal to die.
I would suggest remaking it and thinking of a proper ending for this.
However, this is a great song and has potential.
Yeah, after thinking about it, I'll definitely be remaking the song. Thank you for the kind words and I'm glad you liked the WiP/Demo of this song!
Ya know, if you wanted me to, I could send you a PM when I finish the full version.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.