why did you change it
i was about to recommend this song to a lot of dubstep uploaders on youtube but it seems like you changed a lot of it. i don't what you were thinking but the transition from the first to second bass wobbles were excellent but when you changed it, i didn't sound right. also, you should lower the volume of the bass. in the first one, there was a balance between leads, sampled vocals and the bass but when you made the bass a little bit stronger, it causes the the middle end of your song to sound a little muddy or/and a little sparse. What i'm saying is that you should remaster the high, low and middle ends of your sounds because it sounds uneven for me. also, you lower the volume of the reverb. I think it drowns out the bass, which in turn, may made your decision to crank the bass up. If you just mastered the quality of how the sound feels (or change it how it was before) i would be changing my ratings from a 6 to a 10. this may or may not work but you should try putting reggae guitar chords in it. put more drops and baselines in this song. also, you should "glitch" up your bassline. If your not sure what i'm talking about, search for Rob Sparx Ft. Zurcon - What U Gonna Do (NumberNin6 Remix) on youtube. Listen to the full 5 minute version. also to improve on all of your songs in general, listen to It Come Crashin Down [8-bit Dubstep] by Francis Hall on youtube. After listening to this song, i guarantee you that this will give you good ideas on how to make a better song by putting more complex melodies, instruments. and effort into your songs. I hope this review didn't offend, bore or make you skip it because it's a wall of text. -See ya
The beginning carries on alot, then the pick up is pretty good. The laugh is a nice touch in the beginning. The sound effects are a good touch, the bass could use a turn down just a little. It out-weighs the entire beat and kinda puts a damper of keeping volume at a level to hear the echo of the other sound effects. Im no remix master, but this isnt all that bad. Its catchy, just the bass is a bit much, as I stated above.
9 - 10 to you good sir
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