Dump this crap...
And buy a cable to insert ur instrument to ur computer... this sound sux... it sounds like ur like screaming into the micro -.-
Fine, but questions about your recording.
What did you use to record this? I'm not sure if you use external equiptment or if your just silly - and are recording your computers audio with an external mic. If it weren't for the quality of the audio - this would be a fine mix. I you want some pointers, just PM me.
How I recorded the sound was through programs on my computer using software to make the sounds. I then had to export the file to .mp3 format so I could upload it to Newgrounds.
It sounds so faded out, like noise in the background. I would suggest redoing this, increasing the volume by alot, and not making it so faded. It's bad.