Lot of personals, lots of energy, but you're missing something. Delivery seems a bit rushed, personals sound more like a research paper than a battle. Jokes and punchlines will do wonders to give your punches that extra sting. Overall your rhymes are kind of weak too, which is a major strike against you.
Overall I have to say I enjoyed KillBill's track more, but this one outpunched his with personals. I really can't vote between these two, it's apples and oranges.
Good beat choice!
Most of your lines were personals, props. "It was a nightmare, no wonder that's the name your supposed to be" this line sounded a bit rushed. 16 bars of hay makers.
3.74 / 5.00 (+ 0.16)
do you ever stop shitting on ppl?
both of you came with some ill shit. personally, i don't like that you used bill's beat, even though it definitely worked for you. AGAIN- i think you could rhyme more. okay, okay, it's your "style", but this is the art of rhyme my friend. the disses (that were there) were great, but Bill's had more hits on you. Good disses on both parts, but I gotta go Bill.
Killed Kill Bill? Maybe.
Good beat to pick, ''Kill Bill on the beat'' whaha, shits cracking me up. Killin him with his own beat, good one. Good one.
Cant wait till you put up the lyrics, shits gon be good eh, i always see new shit when i see the lyrics as im not English ;)
I think you got a good battle rap voice, I like it, good quality and shit. but yeah. tight voice.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.