I think that you should have continued this piece. It seems very interesting. I think this could be a hit if you add more to it so mabye should have another go. Im'a rate this on what I hear right now as far as sound and quality go. Beautiful piece bro.
Thank you very much for the kind words. Don't worry, this is only the beginning of something I think will be great. I hope you're here to hear the finished results!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.