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Author Comments

This is my first submission to NG. Helpful comments appreciated.


not bad needs improvements

no offense man but the first thing i noticed is that u can completely tell this was made with fruity loops lol actually its called fruity studio or somethin but whatever.
not bad for ur first song but it could use some improvements it doesn't sound like a song nothing is holding all these beats u created together. they don't fit. it's like u put the peices in but they don't fit together and fall apart because u didn't use any glue... if that makes any sense but in any case keep on trying

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Credits & Info


Sep 20, 2003
12:32 AM EDT
File Info
1.7 MB
1 min 19 sec
2.83 / 5.00

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.