Extreamely Repetative. I am will break it down in sections for u since u want a critique.
Introduction-Good introduction possibly bring in the percussion in earlier, and run it throught the whole song. (Listen to -API- Paradise Remix) If you want to solo with the beep noise you need a different backround. Also, make the intro longer or shorter.
Middle- Percussion is not complex enough. and the same theme goes on over and over again then changes key. its ok to change key once, but you need to change the theme. If you want u can come back the the same theme. Again no percussion. And very boring.
End - Where in gods name is the climax. It just gets softer and dies. How boring. OH by the way. WHERE IS THE PERCUSSION. Really needs it. ITs the overall weekness.
Summarry- Good start, tweek it some to alot, and remix it. More percussion, its the heart of Trance Music. IF you want examples go to -API-'s music. ITs about the best techno/trance. Keep trying.