So it has great melodies
Nexundo is partly right but he should be more clear to you.
Jazz can not come to its full potential using the sounds you have used.
Try and get a good virtual sound library.
It can be made with the computer....
Please return the favor on my new song: The homeless of the world
Jazz, doesn't work like that unfortunatly.
I like the piece, It's nice. But I'm afraid jazz just can't be done on a computer, It needs to be recrded mate. FInd yourself a band, get it recorded. But it's a good song and I know how hard jazz is to write, so well done.
this was written to be performed by the jazz band at my school. i made this to get the sheet music and i figured i may as well upload it