Beginning was awesome
Plz don't have voices to anything you make it's annoying
xD, this song was to test my vocal management skillz, which i have none off, but trying to learn.
But as you just proved, I failed at that xD
Good job with the vocals, not many songs use them and I commend you for trying to improve yourself. Id suggest trying to make them go together more. Its more than just having the vocals stay on beat. Have them work off of each other.
Thanks you for being the first to write something :)
And yea, you're definetly right, out of the 3 minute original vocal I only used the first verse (approx 1min), and in that sence. And I started with the kinda climactic part of the original song as my begining.
But thanks for giving me a lil more faith on that I atleast got the vocals on beat, since I was struggling with that for such a long time as well as trying to make it a little orginal having the vocals stutter.
Looks like I just have to rethink a little on the composition. :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.