Ok Here goes
Heads up, I'm going to be a harsh judge for everyone in this comp. Although I will 10 every entry.
Lyrics: 6: Really, no hard hitting punches, no crazy rhyme schemes, pretty generic.
Delivery: 3: When you come in, I keep thinking you're starting off with shit talk, it usually takes me a few seconds to realize you're rapping. You can make this voice work for certain types of tracks, but not this one.
Style: 3 eh... flow was off a bit, it sounded like you were talking the whole time. Really, this wasn't well done man.