Try to mix up the loops a bit more. It was a bit too easy to tell this was made from existing samples in Garageband because there were a number of other songs using the same ones.
But its repetitive, and too short.
Also Its not house.
Its very beautiful, and i love it.
Try remixing this into an actualy house song with a nice kick and your good to go!
Angels Gone Rogue
thanks but i didn't mean to put it as house i changed the mistake thank you for telling me. :)