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Haha. I loved that line, it made me laugh out loud and rewind to listen to it (I'm glad you can rewind on songs..unlike flash videos...but anyway).
I really like the accordian lead, and it has that "wave" feel to it, the undulating beat - I like it. I see what Darkfire is saying about a different synth at the second half or so - but i really like the way it changes things up. And I definately like the melody and the speed and especially the "slides" during that second synth lead, I actually like that a ton the more I think about it!
The only mention I might make (since it is a WIP) is the very beginning...maybe a less "Harsh" introduction. it's like Blamo - and I guess I kinda like that "breaking through the mist into the bright, sunny, dew covered summer field" type feeling - does that make sense?
But hey, it's your creation, and when you ask for input you'll get as many opinions as responses (ie, everyone has an opinion!) so - ultimately, you decide, and its a great song no matter what!