The disses are, for the most part, pretty generic and unoriginal. Come up with some more unique insults to stand out better. Since this is a reply and you've already heard his first diss, it would be better to specifically address more of the things he said in his rap other than just "Call me negative something, oops I forgot." Also, the lyrics provided in the Author Comments don't match the lyrics in the song. Finally, when your opponent makes a 2 minutes track dissing you, coming back with only a 50 second rap limits your chances of getting one up on them and makes it looks like you're not even trying. Some of the lyrics weren't bad at all, but overall I was disappointed.