Heads up, I'm going to be a harsh judge for everyone in this comp. Although I will 10 every entry.
Lyrics: 8: You're pretty much flossing. I know it's hard when there's nothing on this dude, but you have to at least make it more personal then this. Maybe pull a DZK and call him out for not having anything?
Delivery: 4: You're getting better man.
Style: 3: Again, too impersonal. Your flow comes off in a couple of places as well.