dude that was soooo good, no need for you to rhyme at all, shit flows without.
3.93 / 5.00 (+ 0.053)
you win again, lol=P
Lyrics/punchlines (includes how personal they are) 14/15 - I've never heard of Haynayy, and I dont want to waste time researching, so I'm just going to assume its all true. I gotta take a point off for the over-use of profanity.
Delivery 7/8- the flow is very unorthodox, but its suits the beat. At times I thought some of the syllables were a bit too stressed (ex. "I bet you think rap is in haiku")
Style (includes flow) 6/7- unique approach
but again i still feel like sometimes you just dont even try to rhyme.
"Hometowns, Austin, Texas where you buttfuckin horses"
you don't rhyme with horses at all. sounds good though.
yeah bro, idk i guess rap, your technically supposed to ryme. i ryme some of the time but i like using words that sound simular at the end. its just my style i guess. haha. its just something i had adapted to over the years. when i read alot of artists lyrics and poetry, they dont always rhyme. its just the style people go for. and i choose to not rhyme every time. im a weird fuck. :P
dude this was funny as hell! way to bring fire!
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