Oh dear. i'm sensing...
You're using FL studio... Some effects are pretty cool.
Some of it's complete jibberishy nonsense to me. I'm not fond of whatever style it is you're going for, and The percussion's pretty bad. Don't use the crappy given snare, and hats. They suck. lol If you do at least pogo a tad, or change some levels on them. I like the piano, and kind of like what you did with the voice, and the weird effects going on.
Also being a dance-ish song I recommend a clap, rather than a snare. try that out.