I'm glad you made the tempo so fast, because if it were any slower, it would be boring. At this speed, though, it's just diverse enough to keep me interested without sounding overdone. The only thing is that I kept expecting it to reach some sort of climax, and it never did. It had a few good buildups, but I was always disappointed at the end. This song needs some work, but what you have is a very excellent foundation for something extremely catchy.
Thanks for this review - but that's kinda exactly my problem... halfway through I went out of ideas that sounded in tune with the rest of the piece so I never got to make a nice climax... but this review kinda motivated me to keep working on it, so thanks =).
its deffently 3stars now maybe 4 but not 5 it needs more do another one with gate melody behind it other than tht good beat and bass!!!! nice job dude