Fun, generic metal
This is absolutely some fun music, but it is sorta repetitive and generic. I see you are aware of this.
It does sound a lot like metalcore, but at times the guitar, both lead and backing, gets a bit sloppy. The drums also get repetitive due to lack of change in the rhythm, which could be accomplished by adding a breakdown, or something like that. I was half expecting a breakdown when your song stopped midway. seeing as the guitars didn't stop abruptly, it felt like, as Haggard put it, you forgot the rest of the song.
I hope you'll finish this one, because I'd be interested in seeing the final piece. This one's quite catchy.
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