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Jun 12, 2010 | 6:55 PM EDT
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2.1 MB
1 min 10 sec
3.75 / 5.00

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Rated 3.75 / 5 stars
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Metal, Rock - Heavy Metal

Author Comments

So this is a little work in progress (I don't think it is actually a SONG). As the description says, it's metalcore and a little bit repetitive, however, people that have heard it before find it very catchy hahaha Hope you like it. If you're going to comment, please avoid cursing, but give me your honest opinion. Cheers and Enjoy! (:

EDIT: August 8, 2010. I have removed the WIP tag from the title as I will leave this song as it is, I have not gotten any ideas for this lately and I don't want to get stuck in one idea. Sorry for the people who wanted to hear this finished. :/



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Fun, generic metal

This is absolutely some fun music, but it is sorta repetitive and generic. I see you are aware of this.

It does sound a lot like metalcore, but at times the guitar, both lead and backing, gets a bit sloppy. The drums also get repetitive due to lack of change in the rhythm, which could be accomplished by adding a breakdown, or something like that. I was half expecting a breakdown when your song stopped midway. seeing as the guitars didn't stop abruptly, it felt like, as Haggard put it, you forgot the rest of the song.

I hope you'll finish this one, because I'd be interested in seeing the final piece. This one's quite catchy.

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leopapitas responds:

Haha thanks. It is something pretty metalcore-esque, but it is very repetitive. I had been considering adding a breakdown in the middle, but back then I didn't like breakdowns that much, lately, I've fallen in love with breakdowns hehe It's not that I forgot, it was meant to be like that, but now that you guys put it that way, it does cut the mood of the song. I guess you guys have given me quite some motivation and probably will start working on it this week as I have quite a lot of free time. I might also change the song drastically, except for the main riff, that stays lol Thanks for cheking it and for the kind words. (: Peace.


Rated 4 / 5 stars


Generic metal still sounds great to me. Especially since we don't get too many requests in the RRC that are metal. ^^

The drums need some more work here. Sometimes they sound out of tact and they definitely sound much too weak compared to the heavy guitars.
The main riffs sound very good, I was instantly moving my head to this. ^^

The short stops during the middle of the song sound a bit weird, nearly like you forgot how to continue the song, heh.
Anyway, it's still "WIP" so if you decide to continue working on this song I hope you can fix the stops (ie make them sound better).

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leopapitas responds:

Hahaha thanks! Yeah, originally, this wasn't going to be a song, I just tabbed the riffs on guitarpro and ended up putting some drums and stuff, and turned out to be like this hahaha. I still don't know whether to finish this or not, I haven't gotten many ideas lately :/ But hopefully I'll be able to finish it one of these days. I'll see what I can do with the stops (?) Although I'm not very sure to what pauses you refer to. Would you mind sending me a PM telling me in what minute/second those 'stops' are in? (: Thanks for the review man n.n Stay metal (:


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Generic pills

It started out with some generic guitar riffs. There are so many good guitarists that they aren't worth a lot. What we need are good singers. There's not much I can say about this. It is very repetitive, yes, but it all sounds the same as well. I listened to it five times and didn't notice when it looped. All it is is a few chords. Needs more stuff. I know it's a WIP. 6/10. Generic score, not good not bad.


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leopapitas responds:

Hahaha yeah I know it's very generic :/ I've been thinking it through and even though it's a WIP, I still don't know if it is worth it to actually finish it. I'm finding it very hard to make something that goes along with this and that isn't so repetitive. Thank you very much for the review (:


Rated 5 / 5 stars


Loco que rola mas baluuuuuurde. Anda dormite no jodas.

Son bromas jaja, ta buena.

leopapitas responds:

jajaja que quien te iba a ayudar con The Rising Tides? e.e jajaja gracias lco (:


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


Wow I'm digging this..I'm actually jamming to it right now haha
<3 Its pretty for a work in progress.

leopapitas responds:

Glad you're digging it :3 I hope I can get to finish it pretty soon. When I can, I'll upload the complete version of this. (: