The Pond

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Back again! This time with something completely different from what I normally submit. This piece is actually a story, rather than just some random notes strung together. Try and see if you can visualize what I saw.

The Pond depicts what I saw one day while walking around the pond near my house. It started off with me seeing the natural beauty of the pond, along with its waterfall off to the side. The first people I saw were a little girl playing around in the reeds while her mom kept a very close eye on her nearby, followed by a boy fishing with his father and just having the time of his life. As I continued on, a couple of cyclists passed me as they raced each other down the trail, fighting for the lead, and I watched them until a married couple came storming by in a very heated discussion. Interesting as that was, it was much more amusing coming next across an elderly lady getting swarmed by ducks as she tried to feed them all. Soon after, I came across a bunch of hooligans trying to deface some of the park benches until the cops showed up, which then started a huge argument between the two. As I walked away from the action, the pond faded from view as I headed back for home.



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kinda boring

piano is ok needs some good melody gattes and filters

xXreddudeXx responds:

It's not meant to be high tempo and high energy, but I have to say I have no idea what "melody gattes and filters" are. Thanks for the review though!


nice story :D does each part of it fit to a part of the song?

xXreddudeXx responds:

Thanks! :D And yes it does, each part of the story correlates with the song to try and make you feel like you were walking with me.

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Jun 12, 2010
1:35 AM EDT
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4.5 MB
4 min 55 sec

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