Heavy metal mishaps and name disses were the only personals, very nice rhyme scheme though. Second verse was worse, rhyme scheme remained the same and the rhymes got a little bit cheesy. The Texas line was the only one that was a personal. Finisher was cool though.
Seeing as how I don't judge this one, I have only one thing to say. Did you really just right "sammitch" Steve?
Also, my offer is for these people to join in the second round, nothing more will be accepted for the first
lol yes i *wrote* "sammitch", and... uhhh, hhrrrmm, what kind of sense does it make to allow someone who was DQ'd/forfeited/refused to compete in the first round to join in on the second round? like, if i don't bother to submit anything for the second round, does that mean i'll get to join in on the third? or is that when you change the format and rules... again?
this is really getting to be on some clownshoe-type shit now.
On to round 2 Guzzi. You won hands down. I don't think Cowdog could've come close to that.
thanks man... he should've at least tried though. make it interesting. blah whatever
this shit goes hard
alright alright man, i'm not gonna lie, you really got me pretty good. I wanted to join this battle but i got into a car wreck recently and i been dealing with alot of insurance and stupid bull shit.
Hey, just because i play alot of metal doesn't mean i can wreck it on the mic. You got lucky cause i was kneedeep in shit.
thank you for the props, but let's not be fronters here. you submitted a Trance song to the Audio Portal on June 16th -- the day of the deadline. Stingray gave cats several extensions *on top of* that, and he even *still* has an offer for anyone who is over-deadline to submit a track before all the first-round judging is complete. so, if you can wreck it on the mic, it's simple -- SHOW AND PROVE.
the luck thing has everything to do with you having zero rhyme cred to begin with, and nothing to do with your car wreck. honestly, how does that prevent you from recording a verse or two but not prevent you from playing around with FruityLoops (or whatever) to make Trance songs? i smell baloney and it ain't comin from my sammitch :|
i like your scheme
"yo, most of your tracks are heavy metal mishaps
you don't even spit crack, you're on the path to get bitch-slapped"
fun shit right off the back. i like that hook too :D
the only thing which almost caused me to stop listning was the "introduction" in the beginning. felt that wasnt really needed.
but other then that your shit was nice.
thanks man... i figured an intro of sorts would be an appropriate way to handle a 25 second lead-in, but yeah, i can see how it could be off-putting. i appreciate the feedback.